tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post116627884317521469..comments2023-07-24T08:47:37.746-07:00Comments on oceanic mirages: India shining(II)oceanic mirageshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15178553386597269979noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166916033717856772006-12-23T15:20:00.000-08:002006-12-23T15:20:00.000-08:00I posted a comment on this post...where did it go?...I posted a comment on this post...where did it go? urgh <BR/>@ blogger :(<BR/><BR/>Stay Beautiful...!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166664704368530322006-12-20T17:31:00.000-08:002006-12-20T17:31:00.000-08:00very well written .. the broken glasses will give ...very well written .. the broken glasses will give a scattered image type look (if looked through them) <BR/><BR/>What's this poem about? Are you writing about the poor, the homeless?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166635843461327932006-12-20T09:30:00.001-08:002006-12-20T09:30:00.001-08:00And life shimmers...On the empty tears...Bohut bha...And life shimmers...<BR/>On the empty tears...<BR/><BR/>Bohut bharya :) Lafzon ki khobsorti shayeri mai jan daal daiti hai :)<BR/>Keep writing about LOVE - I'm sure no one will ever get tired of your poems...I know for sure about myself :)<BR/><BR/>Stay Beautiful...!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166515836095103432006-12-19T00:10:00.000-08:002006-12-19T00:10:00.000-08:00No doubt..this is amazing composition!!!!!!!!!!!!!...No doubt..this is amazing composition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!All Is Wholehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02839098888080472278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166404484545243552006-12-17T17:14:00.000-08:002006-12-17T17:14:00.000-08:00u write beautifully!Keshi.u write beautifully!<BR/><BR/>Keshi.Keshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147250771662427208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166355842145866672006-12-17T03:44:00.000-08:002006-12-17T03:44:00.000-08:00so iam the first one to comment on this one ! but ...so iam the first one to comment on this one ! but i shall comment on all that i have read so far by you . i love the continual bouts of creativity heaving in you . u write voraciosly , beautifully just keep up i loved yor first poem in particular ! love poems ! nice but too sugary some how perhaps beause i dont like reading love poetry ..perhaps . pyar kadhta hua doodh reminds me of a ghazal by pankaj udhas which i shall discuss when we meet. thats tommorow?.and blogspot accont khol dia he devi ji lol!keep up . words are all we have and all we have is words though they dont convey much! bt lets stick close and tight to words .,, today and forever!love ya.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166292108753571602006-12-16T10:01:00.000-08:002006-12-16T10:01:00.000-08:00amazin dii'l try to come home:)luv yaamazin di<BR/>i'l try to come home:)<BR/>luv yaniharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05325494998369993761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35796276.post-1166284183009254902006-12-16T07:49:00.000-08:002006-12-16T07:49:00.000-08:00u shud get more things out of ur system...and more...u shud get more things out of ur system...and more frequently :)<BR/><BR/>-a petty bugular, in awe of the precious jewel he has laid hands upon!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com