Sunday, November 26, 2006
TASTELESS THOUGHTS!
Every evening a visit to a grocery store,
Looking and asking for the price,
Of various vegetable like thoughts,
Bargaining for the ones I like,
Accepting the tag for the ones I love,
The line between need and want,
Drawn by the tongue;
And in the pan,
The oil of desires heated,
The seeds of faith crackle,
The extra flavour of, The spicy wordly enchantments,
Added and mixed;
The meal is served,
Garnished by a few leaves, Aromatically practical,
In a bowl thats made of sillicon and sand,
Yet transparent to the core;
Laid on the sandal wood table,
The cutlery shining,
The crystal glass filled with clear water,
And still the tongue,
Wants something different, something more,
The aroma fails to tickle the taste buds,
And the mind gets filled with Tasteless thoughts.
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Dekha aaina gaur se kai baar humne, Khud se hum rubaru na hue; Tamaasha-e-yaar hua mehfil me janib, Tamaashbeen par beaabru na hue; Hamar... -
Unarticulated thoughts hanging in my mind, Quivering, squirming, Spaghetti like, Noodles like, Soft, squashy… Unarticulated expression bubbl... -
Let’s write our destinies on the leaf of desire, Let’s bring back the dead from the burning pyre. Why smear some ash, some vermillion on the...
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A rather unusual way to put thoughts into words... touche!
N thanks for visiting my space :)
very well composed!!!!!!!!
i've felt her love as integral as salt in sabji...and now this visit to the sabji bazaar...kya baat hai kudiye, telepathic poetry ;)
nice poem di,i dont hv words abhi,take care,misssssssing u like hell di:)
aur yeh kuch jyada telepathy nahi ho rahi hai;)
beautiful.. it takes an artist to weave magic like this
reminds me of neruda, ode to a tomato, but also of the inherent loss of pure experience, my readin of it is kinda based on the idea that life gets so monotonous that all one experiences is deja vu
dwai: will join u.
mirage: thanx 4 dropping in
prashant said: dhanyawad
adi: hmmm.
nihar: thanx a lot, m missing u as well
aditi: thanx 4 such a flattering compliment.
mithrandhir:Yeah buddy, i almost agree to it bt still, m waiting 4 dat freshness
join me soon...I really need to talk to u....plzzzzzzzzz ASAP
this reminds me of making my
spices and the warm enveloping
smells in my home:)
beautiful!
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