Tuesday, December 05, 2006
Pyar!!!
Pyaar;
Jaise chuleh par rakha doodh
Mitti ki haandi me
Dheemi aanch par kadhta hua.
Pyaar;
Jaise pehli baarish ki boondon me milkar
Dharti ki saundhi mehek sa
Halke-Halke umadtaa hua.
Pyaar;
Jaise sil batta par pisi
Mirch aur pudine ki chatni sa
Teekha aur machalta hua.
Pyar;
Jaise khet me, fasalon ke beech
Panchi bhagaata putle sa
Chori-Chori hansta hua.
Pyaar;
Jaise sardi ki raat me
Chaati se lagi angeethi ki garmaahat sa
Madham-madham sulagta hua.
Pyaar;
Jaise sharir raat ka bheega hua aanchal
Subah ki suneheri dhoop me
Halka gulabi hota, sanwarta hua.
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12 comments:
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madham sulagta huya yeh pyaar, sardi ki un raaton mein, dil ko sukoon, wohi to pahunchata hai, ek uska naam hi to hai, jo pyaar hai...
Awwwww....Itna khobsurat :) I simply adore this...Mujhay barish BOHUT pasand hai & I love mitti ki khusbhoo after barish...
Subah ki sunehri dhoop...
Bheega howa anchal..
angeethi ki garmahat..
awww awww awwww so beautiful...
Piyar bohut hee khoobsurat jazba hai & app nai ussay bohut khoosorti sai lafzon mai dhaal diya :)
Love Love Love it :)
Stay Beautiful...!!
Only a beautiful person like you can write such a heart melting poetry :)
No wonder I say stay beautiful :)
damn that is beautiful.. i guess when u're in love.. it all comes so much easier
=)
same 2 same blog template !
Hey.......so many descriptions..
I am confused...... ;-)
Very lovely poem !! The way you have compared love to subtle sounds, feelings, is so beautiful !
this is soo nicely written .. simple yet powerful .. soft and romantic .. you use very simple concepts that the common man can understand :)
amazing di:)
no words to express,pyar jitna chota shabd,utna bada iska arth.
lovely words
even i luv u di,take care di
adi: u r right buddy
sugarlips: thanx a lot n i hav really fallen in love with the wayu say "stay beautiful"
aditi: yeah, i guess u r right
endevourme: i didnt get u
prashant: u wont be whn u r in love
sigma: thanx
nabeel: thanx a lot
nihar: thanx swtheart, i love u too
endevoume: got it...
HAHAHA.....
There is no any scale on which you can measure who is in love.....
I love my friends , my family. And i am in love with all of them.
What say now??
Your definition of Love needs a outlook change. Will help you if you need.
Take care.
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