The sand slipping beneath my feet,
The coarse grains,
Scratching and piercing through the thick skin,
A wave washing over the unwanted sand,
Leaving behind unwantd salts.
The crabs pushing forward,
The green blue slimy shells.
The flesh cutting through the beauty,
Goes straight to embrace the sand.
A little deeper inside the sea,
Standing on the silt,
Feeling the world pass beneath my feet,
With every wave,
I pass away too.
And yet the next wave,
Brings me back,
To the same sand,the same silt,
The same shore with a different name,
And I am the same stone,
With the same heart,
Which beats against every grain...
13 comments:
i wonder wat to say, as i dont have anythng to say, aur main to
dee...
kuch nahi
bhi itne pyaar se nahi bol sakta
:)
portraying the chemistry of your mind...its good work...
Well done :)
ouch never thought of sand as coarse.. dark somehow
The very 1st time I met N we went to the beach and collected shells in so many colors later on I made a bracelet and necklace using those shells and I still have it :)
A nice thing to read Deepti asusual :) and your wizard is always there to hold your hand whenever you need him :)
Lots of love and Hugs!
Stay Beautiful...!
atleast there is a heart thats beating. when there is that, there is hope. some dont even have that luxury...
Btw..hope you dont mind, but i am going to add you to my blogroll.
Makes me wanna go to a beach rt now!! :D
Beautiful! You decribe emotions flawlessly! :)
namesake got me to you blog...and got me intrested to...well written....
OMG!!!
reminded me of my trip to a beach in AP looong back :D
thanks!!!
Awesome! I am going to enjoy this blog :)
GBU
Arti
Kahan ghayub hou? Everything ok?
Stay Beautiful..!
Good one with nice flow... It seems u truely a poetry lover and writer....
Hey Nice Post.
Enjoyed readin it.
btw I loved the way u've described urself in ur about me.
Peace & Love
JeeVY
Hi,
Hope to keep u guessing that who i am ? But this one is really nicely said. I have never been to a beach but i have been to a river bank. And there also the sand is same and the feelings are same too. I really respect the feeling that you have in ur mind. have never felt the way that one can think like that too. very very very gud attempt. keep going like this in life...Catch me if u can... ;)...bbye
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