Unarticulated thoughts hanging in my mind,
Quivering, squirming,
Spaghetti like,
Noodles like,
Soft, squashy…
Unarticulated expression bubbling in my mind,
Diffusing, dissolving,
Tea leaves like,
Coffee beans like,
Aromatic, pungent…
Unarticulated feelings precipitate in my mind,
Crystallizing, condensing,
Hail stones like,
Snow flakes like,
Frozen, frosty…
Unarticulated words…
No tomb stone,
No epitaph,
A faint trail…
To the soulful grave…
Quivering, squirming,
Spaghetti like,
Noodles like,
Soft, squashy…
Unarticulated expression bubbling in my mind,
Diffusing, dissolving,
Tea leaves like,
Coffee beans like,
Aromatic, pungent…
Unarticulated feelings precipitate in my mind,
Crystallizing, condensing,
Hail stones like,
Snow flakes like,
Frozen, frosty…
Unarticulated words…
No tomb stone,
No epitaph,
A faint trail…
To the soulful grave…
18 comments:
hi..life is k..
aah!! again...not again..seems u have stolen what was in my mind...
well u write so well i must confess..
regarding words i do have some more certain expression regarding them..which i felt ...
i dont know how its happening with ur writing that my writings are getting coincidental..
cya..! the disappeared mirage..;)
Very well written !!
I liked your comparisons.
touching
Heyyyyyyy...
wat all going on in ur mind..
seems its fully occupied....
take some rest.........
btw, a nice compo again :)
i didnt get you when you said caught me at right time.......
Regarding time, i am late in office today ;-)... i shut down teh alarm and get back to sleep in morning.....
and life is good i think....
wat else at your end howz life and work???
Smiles :)
hey buddy! :)
Im doin good. how've u been!
Love the new template...No matter how many templates i may change this one will always remains my favourite! :D
i loved the header pic! but i guess its a bit too long!
the dimensions should be 648*143 pixels! :)
peace & love
Jeevy
khoi kisi ghazal mein zindagi hai
kuch toh labzo se kah sake
kahi thodi ankahi si zindagi hai
suits my current mood...
Keshi.
how articulately cud one present her unarticulated thoughts...
i wonder n wonder n lose my self
Unarticulated thoughts hanging in my mind,
confusing,intresting,cool,rocking,emotional..
ha ha..hw tht..wellkya bbat hai Deepti ..r u really UNARTICULATED in these feelings or else..yaar u can show them somehw to smone Special.(ummmmmm)..ok u hv to think tht Special..whr r u ..mooonsoon ka lutf uth rahi ho kya madam..bye.gd dy.
dreamcatcher: yup u r right abt the coincidental part,well many of us feel the same though the mode of expression differs, urs n mine match.
Cuckoo: thanx sweets.
Aditi: hmmm.i guess u got it right.
Prashant: the time thing was for ur post.life is good at my end with seminars on,busy though=(
Rajeev:i have enjoyed all the solitude that i wud have liked to, not much though,suggestions noted but unfortunately m v.bad at all this...elucidate more.
Random: wats goin on dude?
Keshi: seems ur mood reflects mine n mine urs...
Adi: I LOVE U.
Shake al ansari: thanx for the visit.
Pankaj: havent really found time to enjoy the rain,m gud otherwise.vat abt u?
Dont post this comment..
u r one hell of a nocturnal..! i thot m the one only alive at this hr...
aah!!! i see..from where...the coincidences are taking shape..
This is very touching Deepti :)
You've weaved the words so beautifully like always :)
P.S: I'm bz in moving to a new home so pls pardon my absence :) Will try be here as much as I can b4 July :)
Lots of love and hugs to both of you.
Stay Beautiful..!!
very well written!
Beautiful..
No more words for it...
Take care
oh i am cool as usual..well i enjyd the Rain ..ha ha..think so..wt ru doing..i mean y r u so busy Deepti yaar..collg..?
it was beautiful Dee.... :)
luv ya
very nice...deep!!
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