Sight of food for the famished body,
The relaxing hollows of the cheeks,
The dilation of the eye lids,
The slight smiling upper lip,
The accentuated desire inside,
The reaching out…
The relaxing hollows of the cheeks,
The dilation of the eye lids,
The slight smiling upper lip,
The accentuated desire inside,
The reaching out…
14 comments:
well written
=)
reaching out
beautiful..its more than the hunger it seems..a joy hidden beneath..
coincidences are like becoming more of parallel lines existence it seems...:)
is it joy, really? or just a little pending of the ultimate truth's arrival? cos anyways, some day or the other, that'll take everyone in its shade...reminded me of vebhu's line, 'and death behind the smile' :)
btw, im tempted to equate this reaching out to a kiss also. what do u say :)
The slight smiling upper lip,
The accentuated desire inside,
The reaching out…
wow hw u wrt tht deepti..kya baat hai..aur pic pasand aye???
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wow..its a MILESTOne and a pleasurable moment that i hv been in ur list..u r so lucky....oh ..i mean i am ..ha ha.thnx .bye deepti..
Beautiful picture! very expressive faces....
yeah true life never ends..but soul dies..people dies.they have to take the burden ...
m ins someone else..?? a nice thot. but yet so disturbing
"We r cursed by the greatest boon that we cud ever recieve buddy." ??? means???
hmm guess we see the way life approaches us...
the perception..the philosophy i guess is everyone individualistic approach..we make it an axiom after relevance of what happens with individual us...
Its well written Deepti and the pic is very intense too.
Stay Beautiful...!!
lovely painting and great verse!
Keshi.
a very different take on hunger...nice...
hmmmmm wt to say..??
yes a POEM....
when you feel you can't survive.
FRIENDS will heal you saddest hours,
and keep our memories alive.
For in the eternal love of God,
true friendship never dies..
We will be friends forever
No matter how many mistakes you
or I make
Because as long we are friends
There’s nothing we couldn’t take ..
Remembering all the good times and even the bad
Including the fights we sometimes had
Through the tears and the pain
Friendship was our gain..
good day deepti.
nice picture...
and well expressed!
as i said.. we all live cz we hope.. we expect a better tomorrow
nice words :)
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