Wednesday, March 07, 2007

Walking on...

The sand slipping beneath my feet,
The coarse grains,
Scratching and piercing through the thick skin,
A wave washing over the unwanted sand,
Leaving behind unwantd salts.
The crabs pushing forward,
The green blue slimy shells.
The flesh cutting through the beauty,
Goes straight to embrace the sand.
A little deeper inside the sea,
Standing on the silt,
Feeling the world pass beneath my feet,
With every wave,
I pass away too.
And yet the next wave,
Brings me back,
To the same sand,the same silt,
The same shore with a different name,
And I am the same stone,
With the same heart,
Which beats against every grain...


Anonymous said...

i wonder wat to say, as i dont have anythng to say, aur main to
kuch nahi
bhi itne pyaar se nahi bol sakta

Prashant said...

portraying the chemistry of your mind...its good work...
Well done :)

Aditi said...

ouch never thought of sand as coarse.. dark somehow

Sugarlips said...

The very 1st time I met N we went to the beach and collected shells in so many colors later on I made a bracelet and necklace using those shells and I still have it :)

A nice thing to read Deepti asusual :) and your wizard is always there to hold your hand whenever you need him :)

Lots of love and Hugs!

Stay Beautiful...!

Random said...

atleast there is a heart thats beating. when there is that, there is hope. some dont even have that luxury...

Btw..hope you dont mind, but i am going to add you to my blogroll.

Mirage said...

Makes me wanna go to a beach rt now!! :D

Beautiful! You decribe emotions flawlessly! :)

Tanikella said...

namesake got me to you blog...and got me intrested to...well written....

Endevourme said...

reminded me of my trip to a beach in AP looong back :D

Arti Honrao said...

Awesome! I am going to enjoy this blog :)


Sugarlips said...

Kahan ghayub hou? Everything ok?

Stay Beautiful..!

Nihit said...

Good one with nice flow... It seems u truely a poetry lover and writer....

Rajeev said...

Hey Nice Post.
Enjoyed readin it.
btw I loved the way u've described urself in ur about me.

Peace & Love

Anonymous said...

Hope to keep u guessing that who i am ? But this one is really nicely said. I have never been to a beach but i have been to a river bank. And there also the sand is same and the feelings are same too. I really respect the feeling that you have in ur mind. have never felt the way that one can think like that too. very very very gud attempt. keep going like this in life...Catch me if u can... ;)...bbye

pravin said...


I am Sorry!

Koi kissa kahani nahi kehna chahti, Roohein roz bikti hain yahan, Aur humne outraged ho kar khoob dekhein hain tamashe yun hi. Mai...