Saturday, June 09, 2007

MERA JAADUGAR...






Kitni baar, jab samay se kheej uthti hun;
Bohat haule,
Ya bohat tez chalne par,
Kursi par khali baithe,
Table par baahein tikaye,
Dekhti hun,
Bikhre aansuon ko pareshaan karte hue,
Kabhi ye samay mere saath chalta hi nahi,
Ya toh aage,
Ya toh peeche,
Uddta rehta hai idhar udhar;
Jald hi baandhungi ise,
Aur choker par tank kar chalungi,
Us jaadugar ke saath,
Jiska vaada hai,
Wo lekar aayega,
Ye Kohinoor mere liye…



My wizard

So often, when I get weary of this time,
For moving,
So slow, or extremely fast,
Sitting in the chair,
My arms rest on the table,
I see, the fallen tears, complaining, cribbing,
The time never yields to my requests,
It moves,
Either ahead,
Or lags million miles behind,
It floats around me here and there…
Soon I will tie it,
And will wear it, sewn on the choker,
With my wizard,
Who has promised,
To get this Kohinoor for me…

10 comments:

Dream Catcher said...

a very sweet poem..really..hope ur wizard comes really soon..to enchant u..b ready to bedazzled :)

Pankaj Gupta said...

hi Deepti..how are u gul..welll i am as always Fine & rockng..think and hope same 'bout u..yaar tu to Dil se Poem likhte hai..(i dnt knw wht i wish to reveal actually..)..hmmmm mujhe yeah sabse sahi laga(i like this one the Most..ha ha)

''Dekhti hun,
Bikhre aansuon ko pareshaan karte hue,
Kabhi ye samay mere saath chalta hi nahi,
Ya toh aage,
Ya toh peeche,
Uddta rehta hai idhar udhar;
Jald hi baandhungi ise''


aree yaar tu sahi kah rahi hai..yeh SAMAY ya to idhar -- ya to udhar ..i mean sath nahi chalta..jis din tu isko pakd le ..mujhe bhi tareka bata diyo(atleast u can do this for ur nice frns..)

ummmm KOHINOOR....chal i will Pray to GOD that Kohinoor will be of urs..

its really an HEART TOCHING POEM..i really Appreciate that.keep the good work sharing Deepti..

u dnt hv used my Link at
http://www.orkut.com/Profile.aspx?uid=11441834546129505512..bye

Aditi said...

aww....

Shruti said...

A very lovely poem..
Waiting for someone....
Will definetly come with a beautiful kohinoor to make ur life happily living...

TAke care

surjit said...

A wonderful blog....thoughts in the poems are very profound.My best wishes.

Keshi said...

wow nice one!

Keshi.

Sugarlips said...

Awwwww, very enchanting poem :)

He will definitely come and take you along :)

Lots of love to both of you, I've been a little busy moving to a new home. Hopefully you 2 sweethearts are doing great all happily in love :)

Hugs!

Stay Beautiful...!!

Dreamcatcher said...

hi...dont know if its right to respond u personally..so dropping a line here..
lemme knw if its ok to contact u..
n u can del this comment

"shabdo mein kuch dhoondh rahah hoo..mil jaaye kuch kabhi
kuch aap mein kuch hum mein..bateein ajnabi..
shayd ek si dastaan hai..isliye ye raaz-e-bayan karte hai sabhi.."

lemme knw what ur sixth sense tells..tk

Anonymous said...

awesome!

Nabeel said...

diamonds are actually not forever, gold is much more valuable. Diamonds are just a hype, especially here in the US

Or then again .. I've heard the word Kohinoor before .. what does it actually mean?

Zindagi.

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