Wednesday, May 30, 2007

A tear!

Carved out of pain,
Marked by happiness,
Softened by desire,
Sculpted by envy,
Polished by pride,
Pushed by hurt,
Called upon by loneliness,
It slips out of the alcove,
And spills at the altar
The first comment that i got for this poem more than an year back was,
[you love to play with words] :-)
Fond memory{I had gone to meet my wizard for the first time to his office, n we were friends then} the moment all comes back. so seems it was yesterday n i have come a long way since then...


adi said...

i still love the way you love to play with words... and i love you :)

Sugarlips said...

You do love to play with words :)

A very well written poem.

Time flies by when you are in love :)

Lots of love to both of you :)

Stay Beautiful...!

Pankaj Gupta said...

Marked by happiness
Pushed by hurt,
Called upon by loneliness,
what called ..."A TEAR"

hmmmm in one Word, this POEM ExPreSsinG TEARS(well maybe of the Poetess or Readers..depnds)

as far as i think THE PASSING YEARS can NEVER Dimnishes the Feelings(awesome and heart'ly..) of the writer(lik u said bout a year passed).

Good Work shall always be Appreciated.

Think you are Enjoying most happy Moments and Continud Memories(fond mem...ha ha) with ur WIZARD.


Keep the nice work continued.

what else..oh ya i am on or..t.
you can mail me at INDIANPANEER@YAHOO.CO.IN for the link..bye Deepti.

ss said...

this is poignant and beautiful....

Dream Catcher said...

How beautiful!!! all the colours of a tear so beautifully expressed

Keshi said...

wow beautifully woven!


Arti Honrao said...

You sure do love to play with words ;)
and you are a master at it!


Neo said...

the poem is so soothing...i wish i could write such poems...gr8

Pankaj Gupta said...

ummm hi..

Cuckoo said...

And it brought a smile on my face. :)

Pankaj Gupta said...

it brought SMILe on eveyones Face..hi..whats up..where are u long..

I am Sorry!

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