Thursday, July 05, 2007

Joy 2






Sight of food for the famished body,
The relaxing hollows of the cheeks,
The dilation of the eye lids,
The slight smiling upper lip,
The accentuated desire inside,
The reaching out…

14 comments:

Aditi said...

well written
=)

Dream catcher said...

reaching out

beautiful..its more than the hunger it seems..a joy hidden beneath..

coincidences are like becoming more of parallel lines existence it seems...:)

adi said...

is it joy, really? or just a little pending of the ultimate truth's arrival? cos anyways, some day or the other, that'll take everyone in its shade...reminded me of vebhu's line, 'and death behind the smile' :)

btw, im tempted to equate this reaching out to a kiss also. what do u say :)

Pankaj Gupta said...

The slight smiling upper lip,
The accentuated desire inside,
The reaching out…
wow hw u wrt tht deepti..kya baat hai..aur pic pasand aye???

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Pankaj Gupta said...

wow..its a MILESTOne and a pleasurable moment that i hv been in ur list..u r so lucky....oh ..i mean i am ..ha ha.thnx .bye deepti..

purvabhatia said...

Beautiful picture! very expressive faces....

Dream Catcher said...

yeah true life never ends..but soul dies..people dies.they have to take the burden ...

m ins someone else..?? a nice thot. but yet so disturbing

"We r cursed by the greatest boon that we cud ever recieve buddy." ??? means???

Dream Catcher said...

hmm guess we see the way life approaches us...

the perception..the philosophy i guess is everyone individualistic approach..we make it an axiom after relevance of what happens with individual us...

Sugarlips said...

Its well written Deepti and the pic is very intense too.


Stay Beautiful...!!

Keshi said...

lovely painting and great verse!

Keshi.

Neo said...

a very different take on hunger...nice...

Pankaj Gupta said...

hmmmmm wt to say..??
yes a POEM....

when you feel you can't survive.
FRIENDS will heal you saddest hours,
and keep our memories alive.
For in the eternal love of God,
true friendship never dies..
We will be friends forever
No matter how many mistakes you
or I make
Because as long we are friends
There’s nothing we couldn’t take ..
Remembering all the good times and even the bad
Including the fights we sometimes had
Through the tears and the pain
Friendship was our gain..
good day deepti.

StandbyMind said...

nice picture...
and well expressed!

another brick in the wall said...

as i said.. we all live cz we hope.. we expect a better tomorrow

nice words :)

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