Dekha aaina gaur se kai baar humne,
Khud se hum rubaru na hue;
Tamaasha-e-yaar hua mehfil me janib,
Tamaashbeen par beaabru na hue;
Hamari fairist me kai dost the,
Jo sab hue par dost na hue;
Jam saja kar mehfil me saki,
Saath Hamare shaamil na hue;
Jagaya raat bhar chaand taaron ki justuju ne,
Seher ke khwab bhi sahare na hue;
Wo saamne hain humare baithe kiye shikwa,
Ilzaam humpar, jo humare na hue;
Gila utar raha hai nus nus me nasha bun kar,
Piye aansu humne paimaane na hue;
Thama hawaon ko hi khamosh raahgeer jaan kar,
Toofan me hijr ke, kinare na hue;
Fir usi veeran mehfil ke, dar pe hain baithe,
Khali maikhane se aane ke ishare na hue;
Bikhar rahe hain alfaaz, ibaadat ke yun hi,
Hum is roshan khudaai ko gawaara na hue.
Khud se hum rubaru na hue;
Tamaasha-e-yaar hua mehfil me janib,
Tamaashbeen par beaabru na hue;
Hamari fairist me kai dost the,
Jo sab hue par dost na hue;
Jam saja kar mehfil me saki,
Saath Hamare shaamil na hue;
Jagaya raat bhar chaand taaron ki justuju ne,
Seher ke khwab bhi sahare na hue;
Wo saamne hain humare baithe kiye shikwa,
Ilzaam humpar, jo humare na hue;
Gila utar raha hai nus nus me nasha bun kar,
Piye aansu humne paimaane na hue;
Thama hawaon ko hi khamosh raahgeer jaan kar,
Toofan me hijr ke, kinare na hue;
Fir usi veeran mehfil ke, dar pe hain baithe,
Khali maikhane se aane ke ishare na hue;
Bikhar rahe hain alfaaz, ibaadat ke yun hi,
Hum is roshan khudaai ko gawaara na hue.
20 comments:
hmmm I take a step back..with a leg behind n a leg fwd i bent n bow to u ur highness..!!!!!!
now more u make me feel the coincidence part buddy...
"coincidences " are scary n illusionary as i say...but isme bhi ek nasha hai...
u r jst fantabulous...I guess m finding lot of questions being repeated that i asked myself for long...
tk
brilliant
dun u'stand :(
Keshi.
wah waah wah waaah wah waah...
Excellent !!
"Hamari fairist me kai dost the,
Jo sab hue par dost na hue;" Wah !! Bahut khoob.
Sometime back I had also written something on similar lines but never posted it.
I can see, you've blogrolled me, thanks a lot.
One question that I always wanted to ask you.. Why this comment moderation is enabled? Is there any special reason?
I mean ..so many ppl come to my blog but I have kept it open even for anons. Only once I had to block the anons but again after 2/3 days I opened it. Just curious. Spam/abuse/offensive comments ?
And you two looking awesome !! Just hang in there. :)
thats one hell of a ghazal. absolutely astounding
Dreamcatcher: hmmm, coincidences r like echoes in your mind, n thanks for helping me climb the jhaad. :-)
Aditi: thanx madame.
Keshi: will try to get u a translation asap.
Shruti: Adaab arz hai.
Cuckoo: your reading is my pleasure madame n the pic ka credit goes to Adi, not me.Its one of my fav :-)
Random: Shukriya huzur...kaise mijaaz hain?
ty :) but dun worry if it's too hard.
Keshi.
Dee, after such a long time I've read a nice urdu Ghazal :)
You amaze me everytime :)
Lots of love and hugs to both of you.
Cute cute cute pic, waisay I already mentioned on Adi's blog :)
Stay Beautiful...!!
i usually dnt like hindi poetry but i will make an exception here...bful!!!
Hamari fairist me kai dost the,
Jo sab hue par dost na hue;
Jam saja kar mehfil me saki,
Saath Hamare shaamil na hue...
wah wah kya baat hai DEEPTI..tu to international Shayri karte hai yaar..how are you..hope you r rockng..pic is really grt..whos tht..ur brother?..nice.take care.GOD bless YOU.bye.
yeaqh echoes right..sometime they become nauseating...well i didn't men in this case :)
our writing is so coincident..but lives not..:)
as usual you floor me with the work you write in hindi...and this ma'am...absolutely brilliant...i agree with adi. stuns the senses, and thrills the mind.lovely work sweetheart.
vebhuti: thanx.
Pankaj: i can kill u for this i swear...
\Nahal: m honoured sweetheart :-)hw r u?
Neo: thanx buddy.
i know u i guess..more than we perceive..life as I say.."in the picture realm"..is different..perhaps..ha ha..
actually, i should not have comment ed on this...
have i the words to eulogise the beauty of it all, and more so, when i know the pain, have i the right to say anything... right i might have, ok, but the words, where do i find the words...and then the age old question... why?
all i can do is to sit back and live these... and understand how blessed i am... and try to do what i've set out for...
"Bikhar rahe hain alfaaz, ibaadat ke yun hi" ur words will have to do here
oh--wt i did this time...?????ummmmmmmmmmmmm well i think i am gona be shifted to tihar..by you..ha ha..
i dont understand Hindi!
:((
wow! i have never actually read such sophsticated lines..
truly, woW.
:)
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