Monday, November 20, 2006

Tumhara ehsaas...


Agarbatti ki khushbu me mila hua,
Kum kum maathe pe khila hua,
Gulaab jaise aus me dhula hua,
Shehed ho pani me ghula hua,
Paani pe bikhri roshni k jaisa,
Inderdhanush bundon me jhilmilata ho vaisa,
Saanso ki taal par balkhata hua,
Aarti k diye me ithlaata hua...
Mere paas...mere saath...

14 comments:

adi said...

hmmm
for me, her love is like salt in food...
and u know how much i love her :)

Prashant said...

wah wah wah.....

nihar said...

Hamesha tha,hamesha hai aur hamesha rahega
di,maine apki poem puri kar di :)
ooops,sorry,bole to yeh mera feedback hai.
nice rhymes yaar,n lovely ehsaas:)

dwaipayan said...

I love a girl with all my heart who doesnt even know if she loves me or not

deepti said...

adi: hmmm.
prashant: thanx buddy
nihar: i luv u
dwaipayan: she will if she does n its worth the wait. it mite b the next moment or...

Anonymous said...

ive changed my blog id... http://redemption-reprise.blogspot.com/

dwaipayan said...

..the next life......

can u mail me dee, I think we should talk a bit..but then nothing matters to me anymore..bye

nihar said...

luv u too di:)

deepti said...

dwai: hey. nthing maters bt ur love does... u know sumthing, love never fails...NEVER!!!

dwaipayan said...

yeah right!!! for me it failed....i'm rocking single again...

meet_me said...

Mere paas...mere saath...
ek ehsaas, ek zaroorat
ek khwaab, ek haqeeqat
ek lamha, ek umr...
hai bus woh aur kuch nahi
mere paas.. mere saath

Aditi said...

it was so easy to imagine the things written..

Anonymous said...

Urdu & Hindi languages carries so many beautiful words...Such a lovely shsaas your poem leaves !!

Stay Beautiful...!!

Anonymous said...

i agree sugarlips .. urdu language is soo beautiful .. english is noting compared to it.

I like scented candle more than agarbatti

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