Friday, May 18, 2007

INVOCATION TO DIVINE!!!




The candle is burnt;
The flame no longer claims lives;
The wax has evaporated,
Traces of soot hang here and there,
Nightmares trouble the dead mind,
Tugging at the dead heart,
Claiming what is still alive,
The darkness all around is purged,
With the light of your soul,
It is not yet time,
To give up,
Come, rise from the ashes,
No, no Christ...
But YOU...

10 comments:

Aditi said...

hmm well written .. if not a bit dark

bornfortheu.s.a said...

pretty deep meaning to it...gud stuff!!

anu1985 said...

Hi Dee..nice poem..but work on your punctuation now..pay attention on that..read modern poetry or the poem that i have written as your testi to understand what i'm saying..
refine ypour language..do use commanplace words but in a refined manner..you can do it..coz you are good at it..

Sharad Mathur said...

Wow deepti,
well written

sharad

Anonymous said...

Christ doesn't rise from ashes, thats a phoenix... or so i heard...

Sugarlips said...

Very nicely written with deep meanings to it.

Hugs!

Stay Beautiful...!

Nabeel said...

when you say "candle no more claims lives" whose lives are you talking about?

Keshi said...

WOW!

Keshi.

Harmony said...

wow its awesome..i like this..
The darkness all around is purged,
With the light of your soul,
It is not yet time,
To give up,
Come, rise from the ashes,
No, no Christ...
But YOU...


good day..

oceanic mirages said...

Aditi: didnt mean to be dark...
Neo: hmmm, if u say so...
Anu:Yes sweetheart n keep pouring in suggestions...
Sharad: thanx sharad
Nahal: thanx sweetheart...
hws life?
Nabeel: with these "lives" i meant Dreams my dear...
Keshi: thanx
Pankaj: thanx pankaj
Pi: well i know Christ didnt rise from ashes,therefore the image of the phoenix n therefore its the divine energy inside the man thats being invoked n not the gods or messiahs...

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