Tuesday, December 05, 2006

Pyar!!!


Pyaar;
Jaise chuleh par rakha doodh
Mitti ki haandi me
Dheemi aanch par kadhta hua.

Pyaar;
Jaise pehli baarish ki boondon me milkar
Dharti ki saundhi mehek sa
Halke-Halke umadtaa hua.

Pyaar;
Jaise sil batta par pisi
Mirch aur pudine ki chatni sa
Teekha aur machalta hua.

Pyar;
Jaise khet me, fasalon ke beech
Panchi bhagaata putle sa
Chori-Chori hansta hua.

Pyaar;
Jaise sardi ki raat me
Chaati se lagi angeethi ki garmaahat sa
Madham-madham sulagta hua.

Pyaar;
Jaise sharir raat ka bheega hua aanchal
Subah ki suneheri dhoop me
Halka gulabi hota, sanwarta hua.

12 comments:

adi said...

hmmmm
madham sulagta huya yeh pyaar, sardi ki un raaton mein, dil ko sukoon, wohi to pahunchata hai, ek uska naam hi to hai, jo pyaar hai...

Anonymous said...

Awwwww....Itna khobsurat :) I simply adore this...Mujhay barish BOHUT pasand hai & I love mitti ki khusbhoo after barish...

Subah ki sunehri dhoop...
Bheega howa anchal..
angeethi ki garmahat..
awww awww awwww so beautiful...

Piyar bohut hee khoobsurat jazba hai & app nai ussay bohut khoosorti sai lafzon mai dhaal diya :)

Love Love Love it :)

Stay Beautiful...!!

Anonymous said...

Only a beautiful person like you can write such a heart melting poetry :)
No wonder I say stay beautiful :)

Aditi said...

damn that is beautiful.. i guess when u're in love.. it all comes so much easier
=)

endevourme said...

same 2 same blog template !

Prashant said...

Hey.......so many descriptions..
I am confused...... ;-)

Sigma said...

Very lovely poem !! The way you have compared love to subtle sounds, feelings, is so beautiful !

Anonymous said...

this is soo nicely written .. simple yet powerful .. soft and romantic .. you use very simple concepts that the common man can understand :)

nihar said...

amazing di:)
no words to express,pyar jitna chota shabd,utna bada iska arth.
lovely words
even i luv u di,take care di

deepti said...

adi: u r right buddy
sugarlips: thanx a lot n i hav really fallen in love with the wayu say "stay beautiful"
aditi: yeah, i guess u r right
endevourme: i didnt get u
prashant: u wont be whn u r in love
sigma: thanx
nabeel: thanx a lot
nihar: thanx swtheart, i love u too

deepti said...

endevoume: got it...

Prashant said...

HAHAHA.....
There is no any scale on which you can measure who is in love.....
I love my friends , my family. And i am in love with all of them.
What say now??
Your definition of Love needs a outlook change. Will help you if you need.

Take care.

concentric spirals

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