Tuesday, February 27, 2007

RADHA !!!


Taaron ko chhant kar,
Pooja ki thali me diye jalaye hain.
Komal ehsaas haule se piro kar,
Sundar surbhit haar banaye hain.
Kesar aur kum kum nas-nas me bhar kar,
Hawa ne ungli se tilak lagaye hain.
Dhoop baati aur kapoor saanso se chun kar,
Mann ke kaune-kaune ehkaye hain.
Rom-rom se japp-te tera naam,
Band hothon se agannit shankh bajaye hain.
Maatha tek kar dehleez par teri,
Aastha aur vishwaas ke bhog lagaye hain.
Aarti ki,rupehli,lau se,
Jhuke hue ye naiyan jagmagaye hain.
Hatheliyon ko jodd kar tere aage,
Nanhe-nanhe haath failaye hain.

Hey shaam fir yamuna k teer,
Lehron par kiranon ne sapne sajaye hain.
Vanshi ki dhun par thirakti meri payal,
Har aahat pe Radha ke Shaam aaye hain.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

m speechless

& more n more in luv wid ur words

W

deepti said...

Dear W:
my words r coz of u...

Aditi said...

absolutely mindblowing!!

Sugarlips said...

Ethereal!

You were right Deepti when you said "hum hain na app ki zaban"
Yes you are :)
You have sprinkled the pearls of love through your poem sweetheart...It was a treat to read!

Love to both of you!

Stay Beautiful...!

adi said...
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Endevourme said...

but i feel meera is more profound and real than radha...watsay?
btw both couldnt make their love succeed,
but...then...there is nothing like success in real love isnt it.?its always so complete :)
strange!

Mirage said...

Its breathtaking...

Unconditional love couldn't have been defined better than Radha's devotion...

Its really beautiful...I'm in awe of ur poems :)

Mona said...

marvelous...

sachin said...

Hi Radha, fabulous.............

sachin said...

is Radha ka shyam Kon,,,,,

Anonymous said...

perfect words,
aap ho na hamari zubaan
phir kya jaroorat hai shyam ko kuch kehne aur sunne ki :)
'W'

anu said...

it's good,no doubt..but it can be better!!

DIALECT. left to time, it withered, like a dead corpse hung from wall, after the sentence. no poems to defend, no stories to tell, n...