Friday, January 26, 2007

ISHQ!!!



Shayari me tera khayal bankar,
Tanhai me teri yaad bankar,
Ye ishq sajta hai mehfil me,
Hothon par tera naam bankar;


Subah ki alsayi angdai bankar,
Khwaab ki sawnarti rubaii bankar,
Ye ishq sajta hai seher me,
Mere labon pe teri khwaish bankar;


Basant me phoolon pe bahaar ban kar,
Pehli baarish ki thandi fuhaar bankar,
Ye ishq sajta hai aanho me,
Amaavas me poonam ka chaand bankar...

12 comments:

adi said...

hmmmm :)

deepti said...

Adi: @@
kuch ni...

dwaipayan said...

cause of u 2..I'm in love with love itself!!!!

Sugarlips said...

Feverishly beautiful ode.
Last stanza is my favourite.
I miss basant season back home lots of colourful outfits & kites :)
I love rain & when the 1st raindrop strikes the ground sending up a tiny plume of dust & spraying a fresh muddy scent..I get a gigantic smile but when you are in love all these blessings from God look more beautiful & attaractive. Phool...Barish...Chandni...Shayeri
...Subah...Khawab...
"Ishq" shows you new meanings and a totally different way to look at things.

Allah tum dono ko bohut sari khushiyan naseeb karay :) Ameen!

P.S : The Himaliyan Craft shop pics I posted on my blog I KNOW "N" finally bellowed orders kai "bahur chalo janoo" (but piyar sai:) I did buy a beautiful beaded brocade bag and a beautiful lamp & everytime I turn it on it illuminates my study so beautifully :)

Stay Beautiful..!!

Damanpreet singh said...

Good one..

Aditi said...

beautiful.. as always

meet_me said...

cho chweet :-)
Nothin' else ;)

Luv ya both!!!

Anonymous said...

beautiful!!-alka

Nabeel said...

what a wonderful first verse .. I loved it. I love the word Rubai .. it's really pretty .. used it in my urdu exams alot. Well I love the season of Basant too :)

Anonymous said...

hmmm
m waiting for the next badtameeji now ;)
- w

deepti said...

Dwai: thanx swtheart
Sugarlips: y feverishly beautiful?
I know the changing seasons here r too pretty.nostalgic kya?
gud that u bought d lampshade...
Love to both u n nabeel.
Damanpreet: thanx n welcome to d world of madness
Aditi: thank u but it becomes more beautiful cos u guys make it beautiful.
Payal: thank u swtheart, love vu too
Alka: thanks n i was jst teasing u.
Nabeel: I know... Beauty is neways loveable.

i_am_not_myself said...

bajay pyaar ki shabnum mere gulistaan mein
baraste rehte hain har simt maut ke saye
siyahiyon se ulajh padti hain meri aankhein
koi nahi .. koi bhi nahi jo batlaye
kitni der ujalon ki raah dekhe
koi nahi hai koi bhi nahi
na pass na durr
yeh pyaar hai
dil ki dharkan
apni chahat ka jo ellan kiye jaati hai
zindagi hai jo jiye jaati hai
khoon k ghoont peay jaati hai
khwaab aankhon se siye jaati hai

Zindagi.

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