Tuesday, January 30, 2007

TUM!!!


Kori kalpana par bkhra gulaal ho tum;

Aashaon ka khilta sunehra gulaab ho tum;

Behte sagar me naye badal ka aakaar ho tum;

Sapno par aaya, naveen nikhar ho tum;


Darpan se jhaankte mere pratibimb ka saar ho tum;

Payal se jude ghungruon ki jhankaar ho tum;

Aanchal par kaadha gaya resham ka taar ho tum;

Chere par damakta mera solanh sringaar ho tum...


7 comments:

adi said...

tere chehre pe girti woh hassen lat hoon main/
teri ankhon mein jhalakti khushi hoon main/
tere har kadam ka padta nishaan hoon main/
teri har saans, tera har ehsaas hoon main

Aditi said...

beautiful.. specially the last line.. it is oozing of the love that u guys feel for each other

deepti said...

Adi: kuch nahi
Aditi: thanx a ton for the warm wishes.

Sugarlips said...

Awwww...Mushy Mushy post :)
I wear payal & I love it.. Payal(anklets)uss ki chun
chun ki awaz bohut bhati hai kano
ko :) Very nicely written :)
App dono ka piyar jhalakta har lafz sai even what Adi said in his comment is beautiful.
Love ya loads :)

Stay Beautiful...!!

Sigma said...

Sundar! Ati sundar !!

dwaipayan said...

deepti!! did u compose this wonderful piece thinking about adi or the gold ornaments...

;)

Aditi said...

I love what adi wrote too.. the two of u are so good together..

Zindagi.

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